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Nice.
To be honest I think this deserves front page.
The music is what made it, and...... it was great.
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Lovely kind words. Yum! Cheers!
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Awesome
Great Job.
Question what the hell is Luigi saying?
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Luigi is saying, "YOU MUST DIE!"
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That was one fat little pud.
I Lmfao when he showed up. the screaming guy was funny to
Okay critisizcm. how to make it better, have the fat kid sing.
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You probally aint gonna answer since im the 600th somethin somethin, but Ill try anyway.
The tracers that followed the surprise fighter, were they in a movie clip layer or
on the main time line layer. and if so were they just simple movie clip filters or were those frame by frame.
That's what caught my eye the most, i can't see them being filters because I noticed some of them moveing independently of the main animation, but ive been wrong before. Anyways I'd like to know.
Nice job by the way,and nicely done, quite humourus to and sad, and great ending. Practice is true, I've been workin on one for two weeks and im excited about it. But holy crap you've got some talent there.
For criticzim try using a darker color for words I got a plasma screen so others might not have the same problem but it was hard to read the pink words the old guy said, at least to me. And again nice job :)
Author's Response:
The demons ghosts were simple.
Whatever move the demon did, i copied all his frames then made a new layer and made a new movie clip, pasted it in the movie clip.
Adjust the alpha in the properties.
So basicly, make a new layer, and lower the opacity.
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it's not very often I laugh at a flash intending to be humourous,
But the cheapo crying sound effect put the icing on the cake.
the monster picture in the BG creeped me out for some reason......
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks. lol, I wasn't sure anyone noticed the monster thing I drew, glad I could creep you out with it!
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shark masterbation, wooooooo
Theres furry porn and now,
Aquatica!!!!!!
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This was interesting, I Haven't laughed that hard in a long time, Great job recreating the drawing style, If i had to say anything that would be just to clean up the voices a little, But it really doesn't matter. You have a piece of art here.
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Well, catchy tune all well put together definetly a lot of time put into this.
I have to ask this,is Tom cruises body done by tweening, or FBF. If it is FBF is the majority of it a copy and paste FBF or is all one at a time, I've watched it like 10 times trying to figure this out and I just can't cause it's so dam fast what is the frame rate anyways. Also, how many layers are in this I can only pick out 5
Kudos you have one hell of a talent
Author's Response:
Generally it's straight FBF inbetweening (draw the key poses first, then draw the connecting frames between them) but in some held poses, there is a bit of motion-tweening, usually for "twangs" and other minor squashy-stretchy effects that aren't worthy of FBF drawing.
Different scenes have a different number of layers, and different objects may have multiple layers inside them, but I think this one had, at most, something in the order of 20-30 layers. This is standard for me. Anything more and it's too detailed.
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you definently have the drawing done pat, You just need a little fine tuning, put the eyes into there own layers and make em blink now and then, And make the heads kinda move a little when there talking not much but enough to give a little extra kick, trust me itll make a hell of a difference, I can tell you put a shit ton of effort into this as it is,this here is probally about 2 weeks to a month of work and cudos youll have your own series on this site if you keep it up.
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maybe the problem is I did this all in 3 days!!!!
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dude i was lyin on the couch watchin this and the ending made me laugh so hard I choked on my own spite for 10 minutes
perfect 10 and 5 vote for that
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